Today is the day I am finally going to El Rancho. Staying for 4 days and 3 nights. We are at the courts of Russell Street School. With our backpacks and suitcases. Our teachers are doing a roll call. Ready to go on the bus to Waikanae El Rancho. On the way disaster struck the bus suddenly stopped. Cars came crashing into us like eggs hitting rocks. The entire bus was screaming in fear. One minute later the crashing stopped the bus driver stepped out to see what the heck happened. It seemed like the bus had two flat tyres and we only had one replacement tyre.That means we had to wait for a tow truck to come. But that will take hours so we decided to walk there and even bad news. It was raining.This has become a bad day.
Two hours later we arrived in El Rancho soaking wet. We were all shivering. All of the classes were already finished discovering El Rancho and were making their cabins. So we had to skip all of that stuff and move on to our activities. My first activity was swimming. In our activity group there is Brandon, Toby, Logan, Trey, Kate, Marion, Ruby, and Mason. We were all just in the pool playing until our first problem came. Brandon challenged Trey to a diving contest to see who could jump the furthererest. Before the adults could stop them splash! Those fools jumped into the water before looking that the pool was only 1.15 meters deep. Clonk their heads hit the ground.When they came out both of them had a large lump on their heads. There were cries of laughter. While they were sent to the nurses we walked to our next activity which was archery. Then the second disaster hit. Devin shot the instructor's stomach. The room filled with screams. Someone had to dial 111. So the archery was cut short. Day after day disaster struck. It kept on happening. In Mini Golf Marion hit the ball so hard that it went flying through the air and hit Toby's private part. On the bright side she still got a birdie (Which is a hole in 1). On the water slide some idiot didn't listen and put his hand on the side of the slide. It caused friction and his hand went on fire. In rifles I shot Logan's hand when he went to get his target.When we went horse riding the horse kicked me in the private part. In low ropes Toby tried to hang on to a wire but instead he broke his back. In kayaking Brandon fell into the water and couldn't swim back and had to be rescued. In rafts Trey tried to catch a trout but it broke his arm and in team intiative Kate tripped over and and went headfirst into the wall. We were all tired in the 4 days and today we are going home in bruises and Injures I have learned my lesson that never go on camp and that's how camp went wrong.
Feedback:Good description Billy.
Feedfoward:Make the photo clearer Billy.
Evaluation: Thanks I would make the photo clearer next time and I think next time I would add more to what happened in camp.