Thursday, 22 September 2016

Risk Action Plan Coaching Session

Description: Today was my first coaching session my students were Cohen and Shaun we talked about there most riskiest thing in their learning and made a Action plan to achieve there risk in there learning.

Monday, 19 September 2016

Kapa Haka Northern Cluster

Description: This term our Kapa Haka group went to the regent to perform with Northern Cluster Schools. The Northern Cluster are schools from the northern part of Palmerston North. These are some schools from the Northern Cluster Parkland, Winchester, Ross Intermediate, Roslyn, Milson, Saint Mary's, Whakaronga And Russell Street School. I was in the band playing the keyboard for the performance. We played Hall Of Fame but we changed the chorus and we changed it into Panekiretanga.
What are you most proud of and why?
I am most proud of playing in front of a huge audience because it's really embarrassing if you muck up.

What challenged you the most and why?
Trying not to muck up or I would be embarrassed.

What do you need to work on next time and why?
I need to work on getting the intro right last time I came in too late.

Feedback: I like how you included all of the other schools in your description. Mike
Feedforward: This post is up to standard.

Evaluation: I think this post is up to standard too.

Friday, 16 September 2016

Calendar Art

Description: This term we finished making our calendar, Calendar art is when you make a piece of art for your calendar. Every year the school sells our calendars everybody have to do a piece of art for their calendar after we finish our art the teachers grab our art and make it into a calendar so your family could buy your art. This year we based our art on the artist Eric Carle.
Feedback: I like you art it is very unique. Mike Sung
Feedforward: There is nothing wrong with this post. Mike Sung

Evaluation: I agree with Mike that this post is up to standard.

Thursday, 1 September 2016

Writing With Elly

Description: This term for writing I had a focus on sentences in our writing. I had to learn three types of sentences to learn Simple sentence, compound sentence, and complex sentences. Simple sentences are when sentences with a verb and a adjective This is a simple sentence The lion roared in pain. A compound sentence is two simple sentences joined together with a joining word FANBOYS is a way to remember joining words. F is for, for A is for and, N is for nor, B is for but, O is for or, Y is for yet, S is for so. This is a compound sentence I have an XBOX and I play on it everyday. A complex sentence is a simple sentence joined together with another sentence that does not make sense on it's own. This is a complex sentence with a adverbial phrase The lion roared in pain, running in circles.
Feedback:I like how you gave an example of each sentence.
Feedforward: I think it is great!!!!!

Evaluation: I agree with Alex I have done my best and this post is up to standard.